Sunday, November 28, 2010

Red Sky Sailing

 
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I think I am learning a little more, or should I say am I applying the idea of 'composition' here to keep the eye moving in the painting. The scale of my boat is better in this one that the previous one and I like the shape of it better. I also tried to make my bird look more like a bird. I am still not really crazy about the clouds...partly because I have the scale wrong.
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2 comments:

Lowell said...

Well, I'm impressed. And you are bravely and honestly facing up to your areas of deficiency...that ain't easy.

I think you've got talent and real potential.

Re "Lucky" and "Magic" - I think they'd probably get along well.

Lowell said...

I keep waiting for more of your paintings! I like them!